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Reply       Seven Rain, November 5th, 2013, 8:51 am

DERP Totally accidentally uploaded this without a future upload date this morning like an idiot. Dunno if anyone saw it before I took it back down but whatever, fixed it, and NOW it's up for real. Enjoy!

Discussion:

Reply       SpiralPen, November 5th, 2013, 9:28 pm

You started this fight, Lowell, don't go all out on her, she's just a backtalking thief :C

OR SO SHE WOULD APPEAR

Reply       Seven Rain, November 5th, 2013, 9:56 pm

@SpiralPen: Ahaha, the pace has ended up a bit more rushed than I intended, but I wanted to make sure this fight leaves the reader just as surprised by this steady stream of skill level "jumps" as the characters themselves are.

Reply       SpiralPen, November 5th, 2013, 11:01 pm

@Seven Rain:
Oh, I don't think it's poorly paced! I just don't want Lowell to really beat the crap out of her. I mean, maybe sassing the Elite Knights counts as a crime, but if so, she's only guilty of attempted robbery of jewelry and general sassiness. I think she's in need of a trial, not some broken teeth.

Butttttttt something tells me he won't be besting her, hehehe.

Reply       Seven Rain, November 5th, 2013, 11:25 pm

@SpiralPen: Well don't forget; These knights have to familiarize themselves with a world where magic and inhuman power is commonplace. When someone is capable of what Ara is, a knight tasked with protecting a city and it's people won't take the fight lightly, even if it started over a theft.
But don't worry, things are indeed only going to get more surprising for the rest of the fight, haha.


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