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Commentary:

Reply       Seven Rain, May 25th, 2016, 6:50 am

Oof. Games have been extra distracting lately.
This page wraps up the current scene and the next update will return to Ix and Zeft.

This chapter is reaching the tippity-top of that last big rollercoaster hill. Things are going to start going nuts soon and I'm super excited.

Discussion:

Reply       JoKeR, May 26th, 2016, 8:24 pm

The page design looks clean now.
You have to tell my how you managed the Reply-button to stay on the left side.

But you could add some marginal space between Reply-Edit-Delete. It's very close to each other.

Edit----------------
Now I have to rework my cluttered page design as well. (^___-)

Reply       Seven Rain, May 27th, 2016, 3:21 am

@JoKeRcologne: "You have to tell my how you managed the Reply-button to stay on the left side."

I assume you mean the right side? Or are you saying you'd rather have it on the left?

Either way the new look of the comments wasn't my doing sans altering the box colors and text size.

I started fresh with the "October Simplicity" template and then proceeded to make edits until the site was mostly back to it's old self. I just wanted to clean up the html more than anything, since I was using a heavily-edited template that was already kind of bogus to start with, haha.

It's still not done, I want to eventually add nicer-looking buttons for the menu like the the page navigation buttons.

I miiight be able to space out the Reply/Edit/Delete buttons, though. I'll look into that in a few minutes here.



*EDIT*
Aha, I figured it out! Reply/Edit/Delete should be spaced out more now. How's it look? Too much spacing or is it just right?

Reply       JoKeR, May 27th, 2016, 4:10 am

@Seven Rain: Yes the right side (-__-) I was too tired. Darn it!

The buttons look just right now. Good job!

Reply       Seven Rain, May 27th, 2016, 6:42 am

@JoKeRcologne: Glad to hear it!

Reply       Aldraia (Guest), January 17th, 2018, 10:33 pm

I continue to nitpick. "Y-you don't think Ixis would kill his brother, do you?"
Did you mean Ixis, or Ixal?

Reply       Seven Rain, January 17th, 2018, 10:46 pm

@Aldraia: It actually is meant to say Ixis, but looking back on it I can see how it would be confusing. I think her concern is a bit of a relic of older versions of this scene, before lots of rewriting was done.

It's hard to explain, but originally there was more emphasis from Fathom on how "anything could happen" in the strange events and atmosphere, among other things.

Reina knows full well Ixal could harbor the intent to kill, but at one point Fathom's dialogue was meant to make Reina question whether Ixis could go too far in a fight.

I might have to revisit this page and see if there are better ways to phrase it, and don't feel bad about the nitpicking; I've been working on this comic for years, and a lot of stuff can get lost or messed up trying to manage so many pages and the occasional changes in writing, not to mention all the writing/changes that happen ahead of time and behind the scenes.

Not many readers comment on things, so it's nice having errors and stuff pointed out so I can try to fix things up and make it easier for new readers to avoid getting confused!

*EDIT*
I've made an alteration to her dialogue! I know Guest comments don't really have a way of being notified that they've been replied to, but I still want to say I appreciate you pointing that out. I didn't do the best job of reviewing this scene's dialogue before putting it into the comic, apparently. Haha.


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