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Commentary:

Reply       Seven Rain, February 10th, 2017, 4:30 pm

I don't actually know what it would sound like if a powerful force was trying to remove someone's arm.
I assume lots of cracking bones and muscle tearing.

Onomatopoeia are tricky.

Discussion:

Reply       JoKeR, February 10th, 2017, 7:19 pm

I would suggest some
"Knoork" "Prok" "Crnk"
...hard Consonants and deep Vowels. Or vowel less soundwords.

Bones are covered in connective-tissue and muscles... and therefore is the break sound more damped.

Reply       Seven Rain, February 10th, 2017, 10:47 pm

@JoKeR: A couple of those feel more fitting of your comic's style than mine, (though it's probably weird that I associate different onomatopoeia with "styles" at all,) but that's good advice.
I didn't think about the fact that it'd be "dampened" like you mention, my sound effects tend to lean more towards the literal side of the spectrum, (like my love of using "Rumble",) which I enjoy using, but makes some stuff trickier. You're the type who's better at thinking outside the box with it.

And I like "Crnk"... At the risk of looking like an ass I might sneak one of those into this page next time I have a spare moment for a quick edit.

Reply       JoKeR, February 11th, 2017, 12:53 pm

@Seven Rain: Dude ...they are not copyrighted. I'm glad if I could help a little bit.

Reply       Seven Rain, February 11th, 2017, 2:27 pm

@JoKeR: Ahaha, I know, I was just goofin'.

Reply       JoKeR, February 13th, 2017, 7:50 pm

Now it sounds/read fearsome and gory.

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