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Commentary:

Reply       Seven Rain, October 19th, 2018, 6:17 pm

I feel like that first establishing shot looks a bit awkward without some people in it, but I wanted to show a contrast between the bright bustling parts of Palacitia and the dim tranquility of the Ethroy's living quarters.

Discussion:

Reply       JoKeR, October 19th, 2018, 8:32 pm

First I thought the third panel was the ceiling of the last panel. Sorry.

Reply       TheJGamer, October 19th, 2018, 9:12 pm

Is it just me, or does the living quarters seem like the exact opposite of Palacita?

Reply       Seven Rain, October 19th, 2018, 11:17 pm

@JoKeR: Yeah I was kinda worried it might give that effect. Is it because of the empty floor or the curtain in the last panel looking like part of the rug in the previous one? I might have to go in and change it a bit later.

*EDIT*
Made a quick change to the third panel and hopefully that improves the composition a bit. I know the rounded curtain/cloth in the last panel is going to look off beneath that round rug no matter what but this should still be an improvement, I hope.

@TheJGamer: I was definitely trying to go for a mood shift when entering the part of Palacitia where the Ethroy actually lives!

Reply       Redjive, October 22nd, 2018, 10:43 am

This looks absolutely fantastic. The shadows of on Misty, Christie, and Lexin's faces look really good as well.

Reply       Seven Rain, October 22nd, 2018, 5:41 pm

@Redjive: Thanks, those panels took more time to hammer out than I'd care to admit so that's great to hear.

Reply       sentiashinou, November 1st, 2018, 8:54 pm

(I was gonna wait to draw this until I had some actual free time but obviously I have absolutely no self control.)

https://serrynia.com/index.php/2018/11/01/sketchbook-18-11-1/

Reply       Seven Rain, November 1st, 2018, 9:52 pm

@sentiashinou: Ohmygod I love you, I never expected our off-hand agreement in shipping those two to result in fanart, hahaha.

Reply       Redjive, November 26th, 2018, 10:16 am

@sentiashinou: D'awwwwwwww.
That's Misty and Lexin, right?

Reply       sentiashinou, November 26th, 2018, 4:26 pm

@Redjive: Yes indeed. :>


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