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The computer problems I narrowly avoided some months back have returned, and I don't think they'll be so easy to avoid this time. WOE will have to go on hiatus until I can figure out what the problem is, and solve said problem. Whether that's a few days from now or weeks/months from now, I can't say.



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Commentary:

Reply       Seven Rain, May 6th, 2019, 5:26 pm

I'm honestly a bit dissatisfied with how this page turned out. I like how the characters turned out but the panels were all a bit too big despite the character cropping, and I probably did poorly on the composition side too, but OH WELL I felt unusually rusty coming back from my week-long cold and wanted to power through this page and get on with the scene rather than trying to upend everything.

Discussion:

Reply       JoKeR, May 6th, 2019, 6:53 pm

I don't know, but for me looks the composition ok.

Maybe Ixis's eyes are a tiny bit too narrow.
Xellis looks nearly perfect. I really like how she turned out there.

The gutter between the second and third panel is "missing" ...because it's a change to another scene would I suggest to implement it. the speech bubble reaching into the second panel is more than enough as a guide to that scene.

(^__-)

Reply       Seven Rain, May 6th, 2019, 7:23 pm

@JoKeR: Yeah, I like how Xellis turned out. (And Reina, although she felt kinda off-model.)

Thanks for the tips, I might do some light touch-ups later. I feel you on the Ixis eyes, though I think it's moreso just the right eye looking a bit awkward, the left eye is about the size I want it to be. (I need to work more on consistently keeping his eye size in check so they don't take up like every bit of space inside the bangs, haha.)

Reply       Mister JG, May 6th, 2019, 10:03 pm

Ahh, relatable! I suffered through a cold this week as well, so that was fun.

Reply       BloodAngelsCaptain, May 7th, 2019, 12:31 am

I can’t wait to hear Reina explain.

Reply       Seven Rain, May 7th, 2019, 12:03 pm

@Mister JG: It hit me the day before seeing Endgame, too. It was hella timing.

@BloodAngelsCaptain: It's going to be rather brief and to the point but hopefully it'll still be sweet! Since I rushed the romance in the first couple years of the comic I've had to flesh them out more later but I don't want to lay it on too thick now.


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