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The computer problems I narrowly avoided some months back have returned, and I don't think they'll be so easy to avoid this time. WOE will have to go on hiatus until I can figure out what the problem is, and solve said problem. Whether that's a few days from now or weeks/months from now, I can't say.



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Commentary:

Reply       Seven Rain, July 31st, 2019, 2:32 pm

These panels have been skirting a fine line between me trying to make the Mass Production Riftas menacing and comical.

I think the knights/guards are coming off as incompetent rather than being outskilled, which doesn't help, hahaha. I have plans for more scenes showing their struggle against the creatures but I didn't want to put too much of it right at the start.

Discussion:

Reply       JoKeR, August 3rd, 2019, 7:41 pm

Then you should have shown more guards landing some good hits with no effect, then they get killed.

Just my two Euro Cents. (^__^)

Reply       Seven Rain, August 4th, 2019, 1:36 pm

@JoKeR: The problem is I want them to seem fast but not indestructible, but my choices were a single panel of one dodging an attack or a full extra page of multiple attacks being dodged, but then I might've had to reserve more panel-space to show the speed in which Kraz attacks, which I probably should've done anyway. I probably just made a bad call for the sake of quicker pacing, haha.

Reply       JoKeR, August 4th, 2019, 2:42 pm

No problem ...the action starts now.
Show them fighting.

*eager*


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